Friday, February 06, 2004
this is the story i said like ages ago i was going to write...well i'm writing wateva comes to my mind ok??...the reason i wrote this is b'cuz the story i read from fan fiction with ah-di as main character the ending wle...i really wanna bash the writer...she made the girl ah-di loved die...then the whole thing so...wle...
anyway my main characters are: ahdi(expected ritez), renfu(well....need to explain??)....xiezhi(hehe)...hebe(she is chio)...xu jie er(super chio ok...)...ella...
this chapter is more intro bit la so ...
[a bit of background]...[renfu and xiezhi are gd frenz juz graduated and lazing around at home...not extreamly rich but wealthy...ahdi a ultimate super rich guy...(when i say rich i mean RICH)...hebe a very normal student with gd results she is frenz with ella and jie er...ella a very funny girl with very gd results too...jie er the school belle very beautiful extreme figure and very wealthy...unlike hebe n ella hu cum from normal working class family]
Chapter 1 **will we meet again**
(at RX high sch)
renfu: yoz xiezhi today got soccer match with that damn idiotic prince high school...u better call ur dad hoh...
xie zhi:aiyah this kinda thing tell him 4 wat...i not at home he can eat more wat...he more then happy arh...
renfu:haha...but i heard that that prince high sch super rich one...surely their stuff will be better then ours...
xie zhi: nvm la...we got talents and...
xie zhi n ren fu: LOOKS ! ! ! ...haha
(at prince high sch)
player 1: today is the showdown with RX high sch !
player 2:we are all set ! super uniform, super training...and
all:super players !!
player 3: eh where is our soccer king??
player 1: die! where is he? he not here we confirm cannot play one...
all: DIE !!!
ahdi: u guys looking for who? why so loud...i was sleeping
all:sorry master jing hong !(ahdi is a nickname jing hong is his real name)
player 4: we were juz wondering where are you...
player 2: yes...without ur super legs, super richness, super...
ahdi: shut up!...i wanna slp...
silence~
(3 hrs later at prince high sch soccer field)
an exciting match ...very exciting...but cuz i not fan of soccer so skip the thing...but the IMPORTANT thing is that renfu injured his leg during the match yet no one noticed no one except...well the score is 1:0 prince won...(the goal was scored by ahdi of course)
(at the benches)
xiezhi: well that xiao jing hong realli very gd...strong player...but lucky we all are not gay is not surely kana dian si by his 'coolness'
players: yah agree!
xiezhi: eh wang xiao fu! why u not tokin other times u always the one who talk the most wat!
ren fu:I..nothing...
guy: can't u guys see that he is injured?
players turned around~
all: xiao jing hong!!!
ahdi: take this (handed renfu a bottle) drink it u'll be cured within secs...
player 1: dun la ren fu...later is poison u will die one
renfu: (smiles) i believe young master xiao wun resort to underhand means...
ahdi looks away~ren fu drank the bottle of med...and was realli cured in seconds!!
renfu: wow power!...
ahdi: i requested for a rematch...b'cuz of ur injury u couldn't play at ur full potential...
renfu: aiyah nvm on la...we'll hav a match next yr wat haha...
ahdi: if u please...(heads towards the exit)
renfu: xiao jing hong wait up! thanks for ur med...i owe u one...
ahdi: play well and i'll take it as a form of repayment...
(as ahdi heads towards the exit of the stadium 3 beautiful young girls walked in)
xiezhi: oi ella, hebe,jie er...
ella: wow that game was superb...that young master xiao bestest arh...he...
hebe: eh ella isn't that guy over there xiao jing hong?
jie er turns around and sees ahdi
ella: wow it is really xiao jing hong!!! i go get his signature!!!
ella runs over and accidently trips over a stool
ella: argh!!!
someone reached out and prevented her from falling...ella looks up and sees that it is ahdi
ella: oh thanks...can u sign my t-shirt? i'm a fan of urs...
ahdi took the pen n signed...
hebe: wow u are even more handsome up close!!!
ahdi: thanks...(walks away)
ella:WILL WE MEET AGAIN???
ahdi:(back facing them) we will...
ella: man he is so shuai...
hebe: yah...shuai and cool
jie er: where got shuai where got cool...only a bit rich and know a bit soccer only wat...
ella and hebe laughs hysterically
hebe: jie er only has eyes for her ren fu ge...
jie er and ren fu: wei!!!...
well watdaya ppl think of this super long chapter...it is only the beginning wor...giv some comments bah...
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 9:10 PM
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