Thursday, July 22, 2004 Chapter 2 *truth foes and moonlight*
A long dark shadow falls on fears
My heart aches and shed the tears
The parts of your love taken apart
Unknowingly breaking my heart
Still lingering is the feel of your kiss
Unable to say u are the one I miss
Facing heartbreaks I dun have a say
Only to hold on till my dying day
~from selian to ______
snow: you…saw the
evil: every single one of us here saw…
snow: does it mean something?
Evil: dunno…we hav to seek the new world…the Lord’s kingdom
Snow: I read about something on 6 warriors from ancient Egypt… (took out a book from her shelf and passed it to evil)
Evil: (takes the book and turn till page 13) when the 6 warrirs gather they will seek the truth…but…
Snow: but when 2 fights for one…the
Evil: truth falls
KNOCK KNOCK
Snow: (took the book and put back on the shelf) come in
Wolf: snow…u wanna eat?
Snow: i…
Evil: (turned to face snow’s mirror) when the 6 warriors gather they will seek the tryth…
Snow: when midnight falls the moonlight gather…
Evil: on the water truth unraveled…
Winter comes autumn goes
Cold wind starts to gather foes
Breaking all of spring’s flowers
Showing off it’s unknown powers
Angel: prince?
Prince: hi angel…so late le y you still dun slp?
Angel: snow today weird lehx…n that evil
Prince: dun think too much…ahh the moon…
Angel: nice n round
Prince: ancient warriors reunite… 2 great powers forced to fight…
Angel: huh
Prince: (looked into her eyes)
Angel: wat izzit?
Prince: (took one of her hands and kissed it)…goodnight my lady
Angel: nitex!
Evil: killer…
Killer: yes?
Evil: feel like practicing ancient sword…game for it?
Evil: anytime…
The 2 exchanged strokes and by the 25th stroke killer was defeated…
Killer: well..i nv fought with anyone this strong…
Evil: neither did i…killer indeed…master of all weapons…
Killer: evil…king of fights…I admit defeat…but u came not to practice sword rite?
Evil: miss snow…
Killer: cool…like her?
Evil: no.
Killer: so sure?
Evil: I dun love anyone…anything…everyone n everything…
Killer: cuz of…madam?
Evil:… … … no … … ..
As ones life comes to an end
And time lost like trickling sand
Moonlight shines and lights the shores
The eagle rise and till death it soars
Snow: hi evil
Evil: we should tell all of them and set out to seek the truth…
Snow: well…
Evil: goodnight (left)
Snow: … wolf come out…
Wolf: (came out from behind a pillar) sorry
Snow: (shook her head) no…u should have came…
I noe this chap a bit short…wellz…cuz nowadays no inspiration…I not in love so very hard to write… this chap is like damn short…but still hope to hav u guys de comments…well…can comment on the poems…I wrote them myself…
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 7:34 PM
Wednesday, July 21, 2004 well this is my long awaited new fanfic...purposely chose today cuz is my AHDI's b'day...woah...ok this 1st chapter...not very impressive...but well...which chap one is rite...juz lay some characters out...stuff like that...plz comment on it...n tag ur ques if u hav any...
*.*Shadow of the Black Star*.*
Chapter 1 *the meet*
Two well carved doors…open up to a dark room…upon entering the 1st thing that’ll catch your eye is the grand collection of books…walking further in… a white marble study table with a few pink scented candles…beside the dimly lit table is a king sized bed draped with white translucent cloth… the wall is lined with dark pink velvet cloth…on the bed laid a girl…long dark brown hair…frail slim body… long lashes…big brown eyes…with air of mystery about her…yes…this is snow…a gentle girl who keeps to herself most of the time…she excels in every single subject in school…but wat she likes the most is to predict the future…unravel mystery …something like Harry Potter the Divination liddat…
Snow: the rise of the sun…another day lies ahead…(sigh)…
She brushed her hair with a brown brush…washes up and heads for the dining room…
Angel: Morning Snow!
This is Angel(evonne hsu)…a girl hu has no worries about life and all she’s concern about is living everyday to the fullest…pure n innocent…unlike her younger sister Snow…
Snow: Morning… (looks at the dark sky)… gloom looms…
Angel: huh wat?... wat room loom?
Snow: nothing…lets eat…
Wolf: Morning Snow morning Angel…
Angel: (happily) Morning Wolf…
Wolf(shuwei)…a guy who lives his life happily...like Angel…he lives life to its fullest everyday…but deep down…he thinks a lot…
Wolf: Snow…morning
Snow: Morning
Wolf: eh today old master day got some new ppl come n study with us…
Snow: future holds uncertainty…
Angel: orh…Wolf eat first la…then we go meet these ppl…where they from?
Wolf: well…3 guys…old master say they are special…there’s one called Prince…rich guy…his parents on good terms with old master…
Prince(milk), he’s a very intelligent guy…good at dancing, studying and anything physical…strong and steady…
Wolf: there’s another called killer…quiet but very good at warfare n strategies…
Killer(kunda), only like the company of close frenz… good at all weapons
Wof: the last one…is the most special…old master say he is the dearest of them all…though I dunno y…
Angel: watz his name?
Wolf: Evil…
Evil(ahdi), super duper intelligent… good at fighting, studies and anything to do with the psychology, unknown powers etc…
Snow POV: evil…
Later in the study of the girl’s house
Housekeeper dave: miss… this is Prince, Killer and E…Evil?
Prince: (nods) how do you do…I’m Prince…
Angel: hi! Wow ur arms are so toned! (pointing at prince’s arm)
Prince: (smiles a little) thank you…you must be miss Angel…your dad said you are a very simple character…
Angel: (laughs) he did? Hahaha…
Snow: (walks towards the table and took out 3 dog tags) for u…
Killer n Prince: thanks…(took the dog tags with their names carved on)
Snow: (holds out dog tag to Evil…and when Evil reached out to take it Snow crumbled n fainted)
Wolf: SNOW!
In Snow’s room
Wolf: u ok?
Snow: u…brother of…
Evil: yes…I am…
Snow: (in shock fear n surprise)
Wolf: brother of hu?
Snow: no..nth…
At dinner
Angel: Everyone eat!
Prince: so watz for tomolo’s lesson?
Angel: well…tomolo dad say we go out n play…
Killer: no study?
Angel: cuz u guys juz came so…well…
Snow: I’m full…
Wolf: S…Snow…
Snow: I’m ok dun follow…
Evil: (puts down his chopsticks and went upstairs too)
In Snow’s room…Snow was reading a book and 99 candles were lit around her…dark shadows cast over the small frame of hers…as if it will envelope her into darkness anytime…
Knock~
Snow: come in
Evil: Snow…
Snow: …
Evil: ur dad brought me here only b’cuz of one reason…
Snow: wat izzit…
Evil: ehem…i…
Snow: doesn’t matter…(turns to her book)
Evil: night falls when the day come through…darkness conquers darkness…life destroy life…
Snow: (turns to look at Evil who was facing the night sky)
Evil: I, prince, killer…we are here only b’cuz of one thing…
Snow: and it is?
Evil: The Shadow falls on the 13th year … cursing n blessing the chosen warrior
Snow: u…saw the…
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 7:27 PM
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