Friday, May 21, 2004
ok today...not bad... went watch shrek 2 with qiao, pat , anqi , hong xiang... n watz that guy's name...dunno la... neh that khalis de fren...aiyoh dunno his name... anyway... iz nice... didn't went out with xingying they all...cuz xiying face super black loh...then i a bit bu shuang someone...(no mui hiang not u)...then since anqi ask me wanna go with em not then i okok lo... they ok la not bad... at least got ppl bother to talk to me...
Chapter 37 *lost forever?*
Ahdi: milk
Milk: ya?
Ahdi: we go home
Milk: di…ok…
Jie er: ahdi…
Ahdi paused in his step
Jie er: giv me time
Ahdi: I will
Bac home
Hebe: now wat?
Renfu: ahdi…u wanna sleep le or u wanna talk
Ahdi: milk
Milk: ok…
In ahdi’s room
Milk: xiao di…ok no one here le…if u wan …cry ba
Ahdi broke down and sat on the floor leaning onto milk’s shoulder and cried.
Ahdi: gege….i scared…I scared
Milk: dun need to scared gege here
Ahdi: I’m so useless…wat tae kwon do, judo international champion…wat youngest boss of ENERGY…wat are all those…wat golden dragon….i dun noe all those….
Milk: ahdi…u tried to be strong for so many years…since grandpa died…you’ve been helping dad…u hav to be strong all the time…even after u noe jie er….u hav to be man…but…to me u are always a child….
Ahdi: milk…gege…am I useless?
Milk: wat am I if u are useless….
Ahdi: (wipe his tears) ok I noe le….ARGH!!!!
Milk: wat….
Ahdi: my…arh…hurts…jie er…jie er ...danger….
Milk: I go get the gang
Outside a deserted building
Milk: ok jie er is inside…
Jian hua: how we go save her?
Ahdi: barge in….force to force
Milk: there’s a guard outside…I go get him
Milk went over to the guard…because his bac face the gang so they couldn’t see wat he did…but the guard fainted..
Hebe: did the guard faint cuz he was scared by his own reflection in milk’s bunny teeth or did he nv see such a handsome bunny b4
Milk: basically both
Ahdi: let’s go in
In the building
Kunda: jie er…
Jie er: y?
Kunda: y u still believe me….after all that happened?
Jie er: dunno
Kunda: ur boyfren seem to treat u well
Jie er: I’m a b****
Kunda: ok….(pushes her to the ground) is this wat u wan?
Jie er: (calmly) no
Kunda: well….if I dun get u…that xiao jing hong wun either
Jie er: whatever
Around the building
Jian hua: jie er….jie er
Some female pass by
Jian hua: who…xinling?
Xinling: jian hua?
Jian hua: u…why u here?
Xinling: I’m….his women
Jian hua: whose?
Xinling: kunda
Jian hua: wat?
Xinling: ya…
Jian hua: (took in a breath) y are u here?
Xinling: to kill u….
She then took out a knife and rush towards jian hua. They exchanged blows but obviously jian hua was giving way….suddenly a loud explosion was heard and cracks form on the wall
Jian hua: xinling…go…the building…goin to collapse
Xinling: arhh ( plunges the knife into jian hua’s arm)
Jian hua: xinling go…now!
He held onto her hand and led her out with his warm blood trickling down and onto xinling’s hands
Outside
Milk: everyone here?
Xiezhi: xinling?
Ahdi: JIE ER!!!!
Jie er: I’m here….(panting)
Ahdi rushed over and took her into his arms.
Ahdi: i….i….(breath slowly takin in jie er’s scent)
Jie er: ahdi…let go
Ahdi: (let go) u…like him?
Jie er: yes
Kunda: xinling jie er…go le la
Xinling n jie er: orh
Jian hua POV: why…xinling…I ….
Ahdi POV: jie er….
Juz then very typically a car cum…to save himself kunda pushes the girls towards the car ahdi n jian hua typically rush out and the girls were saved but ahdi n jian hua ended up in hospital
At Starlight hospital
Milk: (crying) didi…dun leave me….
Selina: niunai…dun liddat…na…(handed him a packet of milk)
Milk: Selina…ahdi will be alright de dui bu dui
Selina: i…
Xiezhi: ahdi n jian hua will be alright de
Juz then the doc come out
Hebe: doc how’s the two?
Doc: mr huo is ok…juz a slight fracture n some scraps…mr xiao
Ella: wat?
Doc: may I noe who is milk n jie er?
Milk: I’m milk…jie er….
Doc: mr xiao called for both of you…before he fell into coma…I dunno how long will it take to wake him but…try to talk to him
Milk: ok…thx doc
In ward 521 (again)
Milk: didi…me is milk wor…niunai gege here wor…
Selina: giv him time
Renfu: I go look for her…
Hebe: me 2
Xiezhi: me 3
Ella: me 4
Milk: di…hold on wor
Ahdi: hold onto wat?
Milk n Selina: ahdi!!!
Ahdi: (yawns) morning niuniu tu (milk bunny)… who is this beautiful lady…
Milk: she’s Selina…dun u…
Ahdi: eh? Hu? Ur girlfriend arh???
Selina: ya….u noe hu is jie er?
Ahdi: jie wat?
Milk: shi yi…shit…
Renfu: I bac le…eh ahdi u wake le
Ahdi: hi renfu, xiezhi, ella, hebe…eh where is jian hua??
Milk: u remember em’
Ahdi: shouldn’t i?
Milk: di…
Wah y liddat? Ok I noe shi yi very typical…ok…I noe my fan fic very sian…dun blame me mah…I bothered with my own life k?
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 8:52 PM
Thursday, May 20, 2004
ok...how's the story peeps....wah nowadays arh...haiz.. so many ppl got prob... anyway... luan i dun need lotsa ppl to love me... cuz my God loves me... unconditionally n forever... God made a forever promise n forever love.. it's enough...n i got so many ppl care for me... i realli xing fu... i hope everyone xing fu oso...
Chapter 36 *milk, melody and kitty*
At ahdi’s house de spa
Jian hua: this one’s good…
Renfu: yup…better than my mom’s
Milk: this milk is nice…where u buy one?
Ahdi: new zeland import
Milk: wah...no wonder so nice…eh…y suddenly so gd to me?
Ahdi: I almost lost u…I muz treasure the ones I love while I still can
Renfu: shivers…plz la…yi ge da nan ren…say until liddat
Ahdi: haha…true…
Milk: (sigh) I can’t believe it…the famous ruthless hades…now…
Xiezhi: we owe it to jie er
Ahdi: our anniversary again…comin
Xiezhi: u guys celebrate once every 2 weeks…dun u run outta things to give her?
Ahdi: I always give her ring…now already gave 6
Milk: should I give Selina something?
Ahdi: u should
Milk: give wat?
Renfu: even if we noe we can’t help u…
Jian hua: cuz u ownself choose then got sincere…
Milk: wat should I give (twirl his cuppa milk) ah…I got an idea
Ahdi: ok that idea not bad…she’ll like it
Renfu, xiezhi, jian hua: what?!
Milk n ahdi: secret
In selina’s room later that evening
Selina: milk why u still sleeping…wake up le…pig
Milk: (suddenly jerk up n pushes Selina against the wall) hi sweety pie
Selina: haha…
Milk: (pulled Selina closer for a breath takin kiss)
Selina: (after they pulled away) hello niunai…I noe u have raging hormones but we hav to postpone this…the gang is waiting for ya…goin out ya noe?
Milk: why liddat? Ok nvm…u go take something 4 me to wear…I go shower
Selina picked a adidas t-shirt and jeans
Milk: I look good eh?
Selina: stupid…
Milk: nah…give u de
Selina: wat is it?
Milk: open…
Selina: omg…is hello kitty and melody milk cup!
Milk: so u can hav both ur love in one
Selina: ya kitty n melody
Milk: liddat then 3 of ur love
Selina: where got 3?
Milk: this is a MILK cup.
Selina: orh…thanks (pecks on his lips)
Milk: (pushes her against the wall …again…and kissed her forehead and distant a little n juz stood and look at her…he knew this drives Selina crazy)
Selina: can u dun look at me liddat…its so…
Milk: electrifying.
Selina: lets go…
Milk: ok (took her hand)
Out with the gang
Ahdi: oi oi…love bird….faster faster
Ella: eh ahdi cool it lar….
Milk: mood not good?
Jian hua: jie er today dunno why say dun wanna go out with us
Hebe: (whisper to renfu) I have a bad feelin
Renfu: (whisper bac) yar…something….i remember today something should…
Ahdi: GO LE LA
Selina: ok ok…go where?
Ahdi: go smash
Selina: milk…where is smash?
Milk: er….didi….not good to bring the girls there rite?
Ahdi: I DUN CARE
Outside jail
Jie er POV: finally
A frail handsome youth emerge
Jie er: kunda
Kunda: jie er? Why are u here?
Jie er: come n fetch u…
Kunda: jie er…I miss u…
Jie er: orh…er…
Kunda: lets go
Jie er: go where?
Kunda: my favourite place
At smash…
Selina: this place looks so so corrupted
Milk: ya….no choice…ahdi…
Ahdi: I go dance
Jian hua: eh?
Ella: wa
Xiezhi: wah…I didn’t noe ahdi is such a gd dancer leh
Milk: yah…dance champ oso….
Hebe: (soft voice) omg…
Renfu: wat izzit?
Hebe : (whispers) I noe why today weird weird le
Renfu: why?
Hebe: look there
Renfu: (shock) jie er n kunda
Hebe: today he release from jail
Renfu: shit! Ahdi….
In the dancing area
Ahdi POV: why u do this to me…u wan other man izzit? Fine…I leave u I leave u….
Juz as ahdi said this the song ‘fang qi’ by guo ping chao took over
Ahdi POV: no dance partner…better go
Hebe: oi…me wanna dance…can?
Ahdi: (wearily) why not?
Hebe: this song so sad hoh?
Ahdi: dun hav to turn me purposely…I noe jie er n kunda are there
Hebe: u saw?
Ahdi: I got psychic remember?
Hebe: so u knew all along
Ahdi: she still love him ma?
Hebe: I dunno…but ahdi…
Ahdi: ?
Hebe: if u really love her…save her
Ahdi: huh?
Hebe: kunda is not that kind who will giv up things he want…even if he’s warned….he will still….
Ahdi: u mean he’ll try to…
Hebe: yeh…maybe…orh he might…
Ahdi: destroy her altogether
Hebe: psychic…
When the gang leaving the club…
Jie er: AHDI!
Ahdi: why so shock?
Jie er: i….i can explain
Ahdi: no need….i’m psychic
Kunda: ahdi… …
Ahdi: (looked at kunda)
Milk: (whispered to Selina) calmness b4 storm
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 8:40 PM
Wednesday, May 19, 2004
ok...i 4got where i stop so i post 2 chaps... giv comments wor... life is difficult... i saw so many haiz... anyway... juz believe ok....life always has unexpected stuff for us... i mean like... when i in sec 1 who would thought i would like that...teng~...anyway... enjoy my fanfic...i love u guys...
Chapeter 34 *injury*
At ahdi’s house
Ahdi: jie er
Jie er: hmm?
Ahdi: happy two months anniversary
Jie er: so kawai… (holding up the pink ring)
Ahdi: mine?
Jie er: nah (holding up a chain n a whip)
Ahdi: (raises one eyebrow) u wan me to…
Jie er: dun think wai wai ok? Juz for collection
Ahdi: ok (smiles)
Jie er: nowadays so busy no time spend with ya…
Ahdi: milk…n Selina…n that shu wei…I scared milk…
Jie er: I’ll go ask Selina bout the thing…hopefully she’ll confide in me…
In milk’s room
Milk POV: milk stop cryin…stop stop….
KNOCK KNOCK
Milk: Who? Orh…Selina…cum in ba
Selina: thanks for accompanying me to shuwei’s …we patched…n he’s goin for operation…(looks away n dries a fallin tear)
Milk: Selina…dun liddat…he…will be ok
Selina: haiz…
Milk: wat?
Selina: met a fourtune teller today…
Milk: wat did he say…
Selina: he say shuwei n I will stay lover forever if…only…
Milk: ?
Selina: if only there isn’t a Ye Yi Hua who will appear in my life
Milk: WHAT?! WHY?!
Selina: why so agitated? He say that guy will take care of me n fate will choose him or something…haiz…hate that Ye Yi Hua…break me n shuwei ge
Milk POV: milk …can’t tell her ur name is Ye Yi Hua…juz…
Selina: anyway…tomolo he go operation…he wan me to be there…i…
Milk: I go with u wan?
Selina : Just as I was goin to ask…thanks
In hospital
Selina: shuwei…kampate…I wait for u
Shuwei: (looked worried) Selina…be careful when I’m not around
Selina: ok
Walks outta ward
Milk: he ok?
Selina: nervous
Milk: u wan anything I go get…
Selina: no need….m…milk…
Milk:yea?
Selina: it’s the dragons…quick run
The two ran n ran with all their might but Selina being a vulnerable girl got caught
Selina: milk…go…
Milk: Selina!
milk fought hard wrestled with man double his size…though a professional boxer …he was outnumbered…a badly injured milk n a fainted Selina was brought to an old warehouse
Milk: Selina…wake up
Selina: huh…where are we
Milk: ar…in…warehouse
Selina: u ok not?
Milk: nah big deal
Selina: u dunn look too good
Milk: small in…arh…
Selina: (holds unto milk’s toned arm and held him up) niunai gege…dun liddat
Voice: hi Selina
Selina: shit!
Milk: who is…is he the one who requested for the one nite?
Voice: yes…n now I’ll get it
The man took Selina into his arms milk was held immobile by 7 man… Selina struggled n kicked…milk seeing Selina in such agony could no longer lie to himself
Milk POV: milk…u love her…dun u? fight…go quick…
Milk bite one man who loosen his grip n milk quicky went forward n pulled Selina away from the beast…Selina with her shirt loosely hanging on her shoulders held tighly onto milk…the 8 man fought n one brought out a whip n whipped Selina commanding her to move over…in order to protect Selina milk pulled her into an embrace to shield her with his own body….the hard cold whip drew blood from milk’s body…juz b4 milk lose conscious a grp of ppl barge in
Ahdi: u bustards (pulled away the whip and smash his fist against the forehead of the man)
A fight treatened to break but upon seeing ahdi all fled for their lives
Selina: (holding onto the half conscious milk) milk…hold on
Milk: are u hurt?
Hebe: milk…u are hurt…Selina is ok…small wound we’ll take care of it…u…
Renfu: hebe…jian hua get the car
Ahdi: (pulled Selina away gently) milk cum (scooped the badly injured milk up)
Milk: didi…dun la…me very heavy
Ahdi: (with a tear down his handsome face) ge…nth is heavier than my heart seeing u hurt like this…
Milk: di…selina…selina
Ahdi: she will be fine…I’ll take care of her
With this milk blacked out
Orh…so sad…milk so hero…shuwei is also still in hospital…but after this it isn’t diff to guess who Selina will choose….rite?
Chapter 35 *as fate wanted*
In the hospital in shuwei’s ward
Shuwei: I ok le…operation successful…Selina..selina…
Selina: huh?
Shuwei: y u blur blur de?
Selina: milk got hurt
Shuwei: aiyoh small injury big arh?
Selina: (sobs) it’s him…he wanted to rape me…milk in order to protect me fought with em’…they wanted to whip me…milk use his body as shield and got whipped instead….
Shuwei: u pity him arh? Ya…u should…cuz he save u mah…so wei da…
Selina: wei…let’s…break
Shuwei: what? After all we had gone through?
Selina: I oso thought I love u…but…when I saw milk fighting and got whipped my heart really hurts…
Shuwei: but thanks are not love
Selina: shuwei…
Ahdi: I need to tok to u
Selina: ahdi u…
Ahdi: remember the fortune teller u met..?
Shuwei: so?
Ahdi: u will only be her man if there is no Ye Yi Hua in her live to love her life with his own rite?
Shuwei: so? Milk’s name is milk ….niunai
Ahdi: u really think his parents to brainless name him niunai?
Selina: ahdi…but milk’s surname is Xiao isn’t it?
Ahdi: wat makes u think so?
Selina: he’s ur brother n u are Xiao Jing Hong wat…
Ahdi: (held up milk’s wallet)
Selina: milk’s…wa…wallet…
Ahdi: take a look at the ic
Selina: (took out the ic and stood rooted to the ground)
Shuwei: gimme…omg…
The ic read : Ye Yi Hua
Shuwei: I dun believe this….
Ahdi: sometimes fate is all to blame shuwei…return to where u belong…work hard for the dragons…maybe one day…u’ll meet ur girl…now…leave Selina to the man who truly deserves her
In milk’s ward
Jian hua: milk …dun anyhow move
Milk: cannot…how is selina …she hurt?
Hebe: how can she be hurt ?
Renfu: when u took so many strokes of the whip for her?
Milk: but but…
Ahdi: dun but le…selina cum in…others go out
After the gang left
Milk: u ok?
Selina: yah…u?
Milk: ok la…lucky I everyday drink milk
Selina: (giggles) only u can make me laugh in a situation liddat
Milk: so…how’s shuwei
Selina: he’s fine…we broke
Milk: broke wat? Milk bottle arh?
Selina: broke up
Milk: why?
Selina: u
Milk: dun leave him… I only save u cuz…cuz…
Selina: cuz u like me?
Milk: i…..
Selina: remember I told u bout the fortune teller n Ye Yi Hua
Milk: ahdi told u?
Selina: ya…
Milk: u said u hate Ye Yi Hua
Selina: I did…but if there muz be a Ye Yi Hua I wan it to be u…
Milk: selina
Hehe…short n sweet…ok done with the milk n Selina le…jie er n ahdi nth much to say le…hebe n renfu nv official patch but…xiezhi n ella…
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 8:59 PM
Sunday, May 16, 2004
ok... i goin to post my fanfic again... type le nv publish guai guai de... but i wanna noe how many ppl wanna read... at least got ppl read then got motivation to write... to those who nv read b4...sorry cuz i will post from where i stop... (if i remember where i stop)... so if ya wanna read my fanfic... tag at my blog n tell me so... i will check if got enough ppl i will post... main characters are... ahdi, xu jie er, milk, selina, huo jian hua, hebe, renfu, xiezhi, ella... tag if ya wanna read
[ ` guarded by my angels * ] at 5:13 PM
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